BLACK BEANS
By Sarah Kirsch
Translated by Anne Stokes
In the afternoon I pick up a book
In the afternoon I put a book down
In the afternoon it enters my head there is war
In the afternoon I forget each and every war
In the afternoon I grind coffee
In the afternoon I put the ground coffee
Back together again gorgeous
Black beans
In the afternoon I take off my clothes put them on
Apply make-up first then wash
Sing don't say a thing
The above poem is by Sarah Kirsch, the acclaimed East German
poet who died last year, aged 78. Her selected poetry translation into English
has been published for the first time this year. The book “Iced Roses: Selected
Poems” is edited and translated by Anne Stokes.
In an interview with Die Zeit in 2005, Kirsch said her poems
were sparked off by "optical impressions". Although Black Beans isn't
primarily a visual poem, the image of the "gorgeous/ Black beans" is
clearly important. It gives it its title and the key metaphor – the hopeless,
Sisyphean task of putting "the ground coffee/ Back together again".
Realism rules until this point. The long, repetitive,
restless afternoon is characterized by lack of concentration. A book is picked
up and abandoned; then the speaker takes us into her own head, and the same
thing happens to her perception ("there is war"). It's not denied
that "there is war", however: it's simply that the power of some
undisclosed emotion or event makes the speaker "forget each and every
war".
The fantastical coffee "episode" may be an
assertion of the desire for psychological control. It's the point at which the
Seventh Writers' Congress spokesperson could have discerned a literal Socialist
paradox. Material goods in short supply are all the more treasured – eked out,
recycled, re-used whenever possible.
Then again, the poem invokes the truism that you can't make
an omelette without breaking eggs – a universal law under every Ism known to
mankind. The magical idea – omelette and eggs, cup of rich coffee and
"gorgeous" coffee beans – is reinforced by the absence of
punctuation, a feature of the whole poem, of course, but particularly assertive
when it occurs inside the line: "Back together again gorgeous/ Black
beans."
At this same point the anaphoric pattern ("In the
afternoon") breaks down, enhancing the visual impact of the "Black
beans". It's picked up once more, in line nine, a kind of
punctuation-through-repetition, but then a more urgently-paced narrative takes
over. The last three lines are a kind of "flash fiction". They bring
us close to the speaker, generous in denotation but without filling in
connective details. The pronoun "I" occurs only once in the English
version, with an effect of acceleration and added mystery. If the speaker is a
woman waiting for her lover, do we assume he has arrived and made love to her
in between those lines? Do the making-up and washing activities bookend
gratified desire, or signal the breakdown of reason?
Perhaps the last line ("sing don't say a thing")
alludes to political astuteness. In a repressive society, the poet might favour
the traditional "song" of love- or nature poetry in preference to
political comments the censor could interpret as subversion. Singing and not
speaking might also imply madness – an Ophelia-like love-dementia, where song
becomes the only kind of speech available. The simple, cheery musical chime of
the sing/thing rhyme in the English version lightens the mood and raises the
possibility of a happy dénouement.
Black Beans may be a love poem but it's also a trenchant
critique of materialism, capitalist or communist. Its narrator seems islanded
among the good things of civilization, the books and information, the coffee,
clothes and cosmetics. At some vital, core level of her being, she remains
aloof. What drives the poem is its inner narrative – the story of an
"I" who perceives, thinks, knows, forgets, and apprehends the world
with both sensuous admiration and desolate boredom. In a rare meeting of inner
and outer possibility, this "I" at last finds a voice, and sings.
Ref : Poem of the Week by Carol Rumens in Guardian Newspaper
Ice Roses: Selected Poems Paperback – March 1, 2014 by Sarah Kirsch (Author), Anne Stokes (Translator, Introduction)
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